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Post by Xyex on Oct 12, 2004 3:40:44 GMT -5
This is a song that I wrote today. I've never written a song before but I had urge to write this so I did. What do you guys all think? Oh, and I'm picturing (for some reason) Avril Lavigne singing this when I read it...
Nightmare
I woke up in a cold sweat Couldn't help but fret You're all that matters to me I tried to make my plea But in my dream you were gone The bed empty by the light of dawn
CHORUS I feel like I'm all alone I wish I had a heart of stone What would I do If it were true? I know I couldn't deal That wound would never heal But you're still there by my side Proof that my nightmare lied
It's nice to know that you care It feels good to know that you are there Someone to chase away all my fears Someone to wipe away all my tears Though I know it wasn't real There's still the fear that I feel
CHORUS
It feels good to know that you are there Someone to wipe away all my tears It's nice to know that you care Someone to chase away all my fears But in my dream you were gone The bed empty by the light of dawn
CHORUS
Though I know it wasn't real There's still the fear that I feel I never want to let you go And I want to let you know My heart belong's to you I want all your dreams to come true I love you with all my heart I never want us to be apart But in my dream you were gone The bed empty by the light of dawn
CHORUS x2
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Post by Jerseymilk on Oct 12, 2004 3:46:45 GMT -5
Well you know I've already told you that I think. But I'll say it again. It's really awesome. ^_^
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Post by Mochi on Oct 13, 2004 16:23:16 GMT -5
*GASP* Where did I go?! Yes, it's very cool! ;D Now you need a nice, happy tune to go with it.
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Post by Banana on Oct 14, 2004 16:14:40 GMT -5
OH COOL AVATAR XYEX!!
*jabs myself in the ribs* Oh yeah..and the song lyrics are cool too.
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Post by Mochi on Oct 14, 2004 21:54:21 GMT -5
BANANA!! *peels* *eats* ;D
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Post by BananaSalem on Oct 15, 2004 18:18:11 GMT -5
AHHH!!! NO!!! THAT'S MY SKIN!!! YOU ATE MY ONLY SKIN!! NOW I'M GONNA SUFFER WHEN SALT HITS ME!! AHHH!!! NO!!!!!
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Post by SpiritBomb on Oct 18, 2004 19:03:57 GMT -5
That happened to me today. Sorta. Nobody called me a banana, peeled me and ate me. I just cut my skin and smart ass me has to go eat dill pickle ships. Genius.
Oh, and as you know I like your song lyrics. Poetic. Very nice.
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Post by DuckDuckGOOSE on Oct 20, 2004 18:36:55 GMT -5
XDDD What kind of idiot cuts them self and eats something salted?!
*reads Spirit's post*
XDD YOU CUT YOURSELF AND THEN ATE SOMETHING SALTED!!! Er...
<.< >.>
What I meant was....Are you okay?
<.< >.>
*smacks Mochi's hand and grabs top of head*
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