Post by Gohan on Oct 29, 2004 22:23:08 GMT -5
Hey guys, this is a "Creative Writing" thingimagigger that we did in English class the other day. She had us write the first sentence (quickly), discuss, write about it for four minutes, not correcting ANYTHING at all, discuss, and then write for 10 minutes more. You have to read it as a narrative and somewhat in old english text... but not really. Tell me what you think or I will EAT YOU ALL!!! 
Imagine your entire family, cut down while you watch with dismay. Bound and gagged; watching while you can do nothing, nothing about it. This was my fate, oh my and my unrest!
There is not a day that passes when I do not think about the event which took place that day. Nothing! Nothing I could do to save them. Why it happened I will never know. The sadistic men sought only to destroy my life and me, only a common cashier at the hospital. No one could be so evil save the foul beast, Satan himself, but what would he want with me? I fear I may be searching, searching for an eternity of why, why did this happen to me? Three-hundred years and counting, yet stuck, no cursed to this cell of mine, to be bound for the entirety of the existence of my cursed soul!
Oh! Finally I am to be saved. Out of the darkness comes a man, two men, no, three. What? come back! The figures...they look of men, but no, they are not. They gather fire. What? What are you doing? Oh, the building is set ablaze. I watch the friendly fire dance around the hall. Nearer, nearer it gets until finally, finally it catches me. I am free, free of this cursed cell and wretched place. Oh! Blessed be, I shall see them again. My family!
;D
Imagine your entire family, cut down while you watch with dismay. Bound and gagged; watching while you can do nothing, nothing about it. This was my fate, oh my and my unrest!
There is not a day that passes when I do not think about the event which took place that day. Nothing! Nothing I could do to save them. Why it happened I will never know. The sadistic men sought only to destroy my life and me, only a common cashier at the hospital. No one could be so evil save the foul beast, Satan himself, but what would he want with me? I fear I may be searching, searching for an eternity of why, why did this happen to me? Three-hundred years and counting, yet stuck, no cursed to this cell of mine, to be bound for the entirety of the existence of my cursed soul!
Oh! Finally I am to be saved. Out of the darkness comes a man, two men, no, three. What? come back! The figures...they look of men, but no, they are not. They gather fire. What? What are you doing? Oh, the building is set ablaze. I watch the friendly fire dance around the hall. Nearer, nearer it gets until finally, finally it catches me. I am free, free of this cursed cell and wretched place. Oh! Blessed be, I shall see them again. My family!
;D